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::..::Nothing's Fair with Peace and War ::..::

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I love this!!! I would LOVE critique!
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

You wanted a Critique, so I made one ^o^

Alright, I'll do pro's and con's.

Pro's:

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" title="Star!"/> You made it 3D by adding shining and shading instead of just being a flat picture.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" title="Star!"/> Both halves fit together nicely so that if one ear fits perfectly on one side, you don't have one and a half ears on the other side.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" title="Star!"/> You can tell the difference, if you didn't know who was who, between Peace and War by looking at their expressions.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" title="Star!"/> The eye that you can see is amazing since I have trouble drawing eyes myself!

Con's:

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black"/> The background isn't exactly the same on both sides and makes it look a little odd.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black"/> There is two tails in the picture.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black"/> The ears are different lengths (It's hard to make them the same length so I'll let you off on that one >w<)
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black"/> The line isn't exactly in the middle because theres little bits of purple from Peace on War's fur, so next time I would try and draw the line first ^u^

Overall, it is a beautiful picture and you have every reason to be proud of it *u*